Always good to get feedback, folks. Maybe I didn’t explain myself properly, or maybe I was a bit too blunt, or maybe I touched a nerve! So, just to clarify;
I didn’t say or suggest or think that anyone is ‘stupid’. However, there is a significant problem with literacy in Ireland today. The research that I saw from 1999 I think indicated that 25% of adults in Ireland were functionally illiterate, and would have difficulty (for example) in reading a drug prescription leaflet or filling out a housing application form. There are many causes, including low levels of education, poor access to education, disability (sensory, intellectual or physical), culture and attitudes, language and many more.
I am definitely not trying score political party points or anti-Enda points. For the record, I’ve been reasonably impressed with the way Enda has grown into his role, and I wasn’t surprised at all at today’s opinion poll results. The feedback about Enda I get from Labour people in and around Govt is generally positive. I’d also have no doubt that anyone could easily find a pile of speeches or press releases or policy documents on the Labour website that are similarly obtuse.
I take the point that the speech was delivered verbally and not on paper. I didn’t see it myself, and I’d have thought that the vast majority of people didn’t see it. At best, they might have seen a 20-30 second clip on the tv news, followed by commentary from journalists etc.
I’m a big fan of plain English. It is generally very hard to sell the concept, and even harder to get people to change. Just like everyone thinks they’re a good driver, everyone pretty much thinks they are a good writer. Most of us aren’t. Testing the effectiveness of written materials does not happen much, in comparison to testing the effectiveness of a new building or testing the effectiveness of a new IT system. Much of our written output does not reach its target audience or have its desired effect. Maybe if we wrote a bit less, with a bit more focus, we would get better results.
Was it Mark Twain who wrote “I didn’t have time to write you a short letter, so I’m writing you a long one instead”.