Hi,
more tips.
For your essay, the computerised marker is called the E-Rater.
It looks for the following :
1. Writing that is grammatical, concise, direct and persuasive displays " superior control of language".
2. Think logically and express yourself clearly.
3. Use good grammar and correct diction (word choice).
4. Use good syntax - vary sentence length, and structure (some with clauses), ensure ideas are clear.
5. Keep things simple - sentence structure, organisation etc.
6. Ensure everything you say is relevant to the topic
E-rater is programmed to recognise:
- the syntactical and grammatical variety that marks high-scoring essays,
- the structural words that are found in well-organised essays
Keywords:
1. Argument essays should contain contrast words such as: However, On the other hand
2. The best essays tend to contain:
- keywords that indicate sequential arrangements or parallelisms, such as not only, but also, furthermore, first, since for example
- keywords that signal Emphasis, Conclusion, Illustration, and Evidence
Syntactical Variety:
Use good synonyms for the phrases in your essay topic.
e.g.
Responsibility : obligation, duty, accountability
Business Leader : entrepreneur, chief executive
An outstanding essay shows:
- Insightfully presents and convincingly supports an opinion on the issue or a critique of the argu.
- Ideas are very clear, well organised & logically connected
- Shows superior control of language, grammar, stylistic variety, and accepted conventions.
Cheers,
Ragazza