P PMU Registered User Messages 1,175 25 Apr 2006 #21 Brendan: You should have said: These are some notes that I compiled some time ago for internal use in a magazine with which I was involved. or These are some notes, which I compiled some time ago, for internal use in a magazine with which I was involved. And not: These are some notes which I compiled some time ago for internal use in a magazine that I was involved in.
Brendan: You should have said: These are some notes that I compiled some time ago for internal use in a magazine with which I was involved. or These are some notes, which I compiled some time ago, for internal use in a magazine with which I was involved. And not: These are some notes which I compiled some time ago for internal use in a magazine that I was involved in.